Please don't make me...

http://backstage.draftlight.net/6F0B2AL71A/pd.jpg

there's a story in her eyes, but it's written by you.

I really don't know the first thing about CG rendering, but from a totally laymen and pure asthetic POV, id' say that I would prefer to see the figure a little more sharply and defiantly the background darker, I think it would help to create a better mood. Of course, I don't know what mood you are going for, I just feel like a dark one IMO.

"Hey guys i'm in Japan so I cant own a real gun. Airsoft for the win. By the way my elegant gothic lolita costume is on the cutting edge and I will be the best at the con because i'm asian. Highfives guys."

So ya

Look I know you really enjoyed the three pirates movies, I did too. And at first i went along with your enthusiasm for pirate costuming and theme party nights. But its been three weeks of this shit now and if I hear you try to do another Jack Sparrow impression, I swear to god I will blow off your fucking chin beard and your black pearls.

yeah, I don't really 'do' backdrops, for most renders someone else will be adding the real-world video behind m'people. Yay for stock photos but the lack of DoF is me being a lazy-ass

MG - she's dirty and slightly bruised, not entirely in shadow.. but I got diverted by alcofrol before ripping up the dress so it's not as obvious as it could have been. Here's what she looked like before the fun started...

http://backstage.draftlight.net/6F0B2AL71A/pdf.jpg

Trotter - priceless - now you've got me thinking a whole new scene ;)

I'd love to see that picture with her holding the gun the traditional way