nightmare of dark love

Hello my friends,
what do you think of my latest work?


the darkness is coming,
like a train in the night,
my body is hatching into something beautiful,
my body is sexy
but there are thorns at my feet,
i slips in broken glass,
i am the egg which is lovely and sweet



it is about my childhood in madrid, was very difficult, i thought i would become a beautiful boy, but the shell was cracked open too early you see? it was wrong. so so wrong. they never should have taken me from the womb. our love was so strong.

That is pretty kewl... yes.. very visual

I find it sophomoric.

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Originally Posted by Toe Cutter

I find it sophomoric.

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:yeeaaahh:
lol@ my body is sexy

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Originally Posted by Pull~My~Hair

:yeeaaahh:
lol@ my body is sexy

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sounds like a rodrigo line...hrmmmmmmmmmmmmm ~_*

hey i like it taste full has meanin keep it up


HEY wheres the fuckin comas???????
Thanks MG my buttons broke ;(

is beautiful man, you know that you are the poet and i have a good body, you know miguel told me my body is like david hasslehoff but without the hair?

he said it when we were in the gym working out, not like i showed him or anything

it sounds familiar

The title of this thread makes me think about the time I was banging that Haitian whore and got a case of the drips.

regards,

so i take it your penus had to get that hooked scrapey syringey thing huh Toe Cutter?

and for the record i was wrong... it's Troll Time.