"Comment on, then Post A Poem"

"Nigh"

I am thinking deep things,
opening my featherless wings.
I am preying upon deepest notions,
carried by surreal potions.

Wanton and wandering like a souless glance,
shadows and halls and hands filled with glass.
ranting and raving and ravaging that tight ass
luscious sight, inexplicable, fine lass.

rumor against my thigh
hair pulled tightly and back up high
I am undone,
and I feel you like none

cannot defame
wouldn't rename
will surely untame
total lack of shame

heat in the mouth
rising up to go south.
Open crevice,
Love on a precipice.

Heat inhaled,
lust impaled.
Heaving sigh,
the climax is nigh.

And She Is

She exhales and I breathe in,
Like sampling the bouquet of her,
My finest wine.
My hands trace over her skin and I feel the roughness there,
Imperfect and scarred
And she is gorgeous

She breathes in and I exhale,
My lips tracing down to her breasts,
Kisses planted on each,
An offering to a goddess
I cup her breasts in the palm of my hands,
She shifts, restless
Breath hitching
And she is wanting

She sinks down and I lean in,
My fingers trace over her hips,
Lips finding her pelvic bone
Softly defined lines that lead me down
I grace her with my lips
And she is there

She arches and I move back,
Teasing her with breath and tongue,
She pleads and I give her all
Touching, giving, fucking, loving
She cries out and I smile loving the play of my name on her lips
Relaxing she smiles and I move up to meet her
I cup her face in my hands
And she is mine
And she is everything.

wow but that first one was really nice. I usually don't like poetry that ryhmes because it gets so corny but that was executed quite well.

Here I sit
Broken hearted
Tried to shit
Only farted

lol, thats an interesting one rockwulf

"just another..."

just another burden
just another pain
just another droplet
in a field of rain

just another heartache
just another blow
just another break-down
in the freezing cold

one more little smudge
i spilt it again
made another mark
its just antoher stain

just another tear
just another cry
just another question
and the answer's, why?

just another scream
just another fight
just another blow-out
when the time is right

one more little rip
i cut it again
made another scar
its just another vein

just another gap
just another blade
just another stream
in the world i made

just another kid
just another fool
just another life
taken by school

one more little laugh
to those that cried
made another loser
commit...
just another suicide

:yeeaaahh:

the rythyms a little off but I really like that



cement me in
and make it deep
another brick
from the heap

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Mr Karl

cement me in
and make it deep
another brick
from the heap

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pink floyd? :)

i like to mongle them until there is no meaning left:

spade arc eliminate
simplectic buyer schultz
perfumery rebel roughish took
birthplace relyer waltz.

steely effeminate logo notch
condemn depository
doctor let crockery scylla
rub their suppository.

cuprous phosphorus jeffrey brimstone
stencil nuthatch crump
indices cockatoo lockup leghorn
key application dump.

headstone algal escape southpaw
durer maureen mate
maltese soybean margo lentil
betelgeuse bibliophile wait

autonomic nichrome ransack
brunette plump astray
attribution inexplainable
invoice birdseed hay.