tell me what you think please??

[rayvanfire]

Fallen Angels And Demon Princes

ANGELS AND DEMONS SHOULD NOT BE,
BUT THIS IS A TELL OF LOVE YOU SEE,

A LONG TIME AGO A WOODLAND NYMPH CAPTAVATED A DEMONPRINCE. SHE HELD HIS HEART, HE LOVED HER SO, SHE HURT HIM MUCH AND WOULDN'T LET GO, SHE CRUSHED HIS DREAMS, AND STOLE HIS CROWN, RIPPED HIM UP AND BEAT HIM DOWN, HE GOT AWAY AND TRIED TO START FRESH BUT THE SCARS SHE LEFT WERE DEEP IN HIS FLESH.

IN A WEB SO INFINITE HE FOUND AN ANGEL NOT SO INNOCENT, SHE FELL IN LOVE, AND HEALED HIS HEART, PROMISING NEVER TO BE APART. THE NYMPH, NOT SO HAPPY WITH THIS WANTED HIM BACK AND THREW A FIT, BUT THAT ONLY BROUGHT THEM CLOSER YOU SEE, THE ANGEL STAYED BY HIM THROUGH THE INTENSITY.

THE DEMON CLAMED THE ANGEL AND KNELT AT HER FEET, THE NYMPH HOWEVER WILL STILL BE WEAK, SHE'LL NEVER AGAIN BRING HIM DOWN, FOR NOW HE WEARS THE ANGELS CROWN.

[killerkat]

well, hot damn someone must have stalked me and wrote my story with crazy names .....,'cept my girl loved me when she did it.....

love has fucked up my life so many times

[killerkat]

damn i just relized how whiney i sound.....i need a drink .....

[a_small_death]

I'll drink with ya on that one. Then again I am that demon.