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    Shivvenfist's Avatar Senior Member
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    "Nigh"

    I am thinking deep things,
    opening my featherless wings.
    I am preying upon deepest notions,
    carried by surreal potions.

    Wanton and wandering like a souless glance,
    shadows and halls and hands filled with glass.
    ranting and raving and ravaging that tight ass
    luscious sight, inexplicable, fine lass.

    rumor against my thigh
    hair pulled tightly and back up high
    I am undone,
    and I feel you like none

    cannot defame
    wouldn't rename
    will surely untame
    total lack of shame

    heat in the mouth
    rising up to go south.
    Open crevice,
    Love on a precipice.

    Heat inhaled,
    lust impaled.
    Heaving sigh,
    the climax is nigh.

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    And She Is

    She exhales and I breathe in,
    Like sampling the bouquet of her,
    My finest wine.
    My hands trace over her skin and I feel the roughness there,
    Imperfect and scarred
    And she is gorgeous

    She breathes in and I exhale,
    My lips tracing down to her breasts,
    Kisses planted on each,
    An offering to a goddess
    I cup her breasts in the palm of my hands,
    She shifts, restless
    Breath hitching
    And she is wanting

    She sinks down and I lean in,
    My fingers trace over her hips,
    Lips finding her pelvic bone
    Softly defined lines that lead me down
    I grace her with my lips
    And she is there

    She arches and I move back,
    Teasing her with breath and tongue,
    She pleads and I give her all
    Touching, giving, fucking, loving
    She cries out and I smile loving the play of my name on her lips
    Relaxing she smiles and I move up to meet her
    I cup her face in my hands
    And she is mine
    And she is everything.

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    Default Re: "Comment on, then Post A Poem"

    wow but that first one was really nice. I usually don't like poetry that ryhmes because it gets so corny but that was executed quite well.

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    Here I sit
    Broken hearted
    Tried to shit
    Only farted

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    lol, thats an interesting one rockwulf

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    "just another..."

    just another burden
    just another pain
    just another droplet
    in a field of rain

    just another heartache
    just another blow
    just another break-down
    in the freezing cold

    one more little smudge
    i spilt it again
    made another mark
    its just antoher stain

    just another tear
    just another cry
    just another question
    and the answer's, why?

    just another scream
    just another fight
    just another blow-out
    when the time is right

    one more little rip
    i cut it again
    made another scar
    its just another vein

    just another gap
    just another blade
    just another stream
    in the world i made

    just another kid
    just another fool
    just another life
    taken by school

    one more little laugh
    to those that cried
    made another loser
    commit...
    just another suicide
    Last edited by morbid_lady; 02-19-2006 at 08:10 PM. Reason: should have spell checked, lol

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    Default Re: "Comment on, then Post A Poem"



    the rythyms a little off but I really like that



    cement me in
    and make it deep
    another brick
    from the heap

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    Default Re: "Comment on, then Post A Poem"

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr Karl
    cement me in
    and make it deep
    another brick
    from the heap

    pink floyd?

    i like to mongle them until there is no meaning left:

    spade arc eliminate
    simplectic buyer schultz
    perfumery rebel roughish took
    birthplace relyer waltz.

    steely effeminate logo notch
    condemn depository
    doctor let crockery scylla
    rub their suppository.

    cuprous phosphorus jeffrey brimstone
    stencil nuthatch crump
    indices cockatoo lockup leghorn
    key application dump.

    headstone algal escape southpaw
    durer maureen mate
    maltese soybean margo lentil
    betelgeuse bibliophile wait

    autonomic nichrome ransack
    brunette plump astray
    attribution inexplainable
    invoice birdseed hay.

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