Hello, this is my first time using the BBB. I wrote this poem. What do you think?

[DarkGodess]

Harsh Reality

I have come to the exasperating revelation that the seamlessly evolving human has indeed lost its god given humanity, and has from this point forth, been deemed destined for damnation. The wrechedness of my curious conclusion perils in the face of this disturbing, yet enduring reality. Changing this course bequeathed upone us through countless generations of systimatically desacrating the human spirit and character, now seems to have provoked an irreversible lack of concideration for life of all forms. This is the road that paves the way to all human evil, this is where it all started, and this is where it will all end.

[SomethingSelfrighteous]

hola. I really liked your poem

[Kidthorazine]

hello, nice poem

[bre.star]

you have used big words and worded them together very beautifully i love ur writing style

[DarkGodess]

Thank you every one. Its rather dark but arent we all. I realy like using this mesage board it makes me in some way connected to people like me and that is more then refreshing to me. Would anyone like to read more poems?

[CPRB]

nice poetry, dark but intelligent, anyhow welcome

[Shadow]

DAMN I love it is dark and deep its just awsome all together plz post more of your poems!! welcome by the way!!

[rayvanfire]

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