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    post your fav poem.. your work and or anothers

    Mine

    To which agony bestills the once beating heart,
    I let go of another door opening to my soul.
    I'll try to forget your words as you went to depart
    But the tears I cry are unquenchable by any lull

    I needed you to understand I have things I have to sort out,
    because I'm not perfect all the time, I can't always do right
    because apparently you've percieved I've forgotten what loves about
    and you've drowned into darkness the love I once called light

    It hurts more every moment I breathe, I can't survive alone
    But then again I always have before
    I pushed away the things I had to do, Life itself for you I postpone
    but you've sunk a hook into the darkness of my core

    Ripping me apart you laugh as you drive down that mile
    And I cry here, holding myself because your warmth is gone
    you were once the only reason I breathed, the only reason I smile
    But now you're the reason I suffer, the reason I feel wrong

    So be rightous and let me go for your own refinement
    So you could use my unhappiness for your excuse to run away
    But agony hath reigned it's hell for where I once thought was heaven sent
    And you whip me with the own strings of my naive heart

    You made me unhappy, but still yet I stayed
    Not yours but always beside you when you needed my help
    Of all prices, I've become the one to have done most and been paid
    For the pain that I've lived with, the one you've left for trelp

    Cry to you I won't do anymore because you make me want to cry
    And if you want me to tell you the truth
    Again for you, I feel like in my heart I still want to die
    but you make the earth closer to my touch because i'm already gone.


    Edgar

    ANNABEL LEE


    by Edgar Allan Poe
    (1849)



    It was many and many a year ago,
    In a kingdom by the sea,
    That a maiden there lived whom you may know
    By the name of ANNABEL LEE;--
    And this maiden she lived with no other thought
    Than to love and be loved by me.
    She was a child and I was a child,
    In this kingdom by the sea,
    But we loved with a love that was more than love--
    I and my Annabel Lee--
    With a love that the winged seraphs of heaven
    Coveted her and me.

    And this was the reason that, long ago,
    In this kingdom by the sea,
    A wind blew out of a cloud by night
    Chilling my Annabel Lee;
    So that her high-born kinsman came
    And bore her away from me,
    To shut her up in a sepulchre
    In this kingdom by the sea.

    The angels, not half so happy in Heaven,
    Went envying her and me:--
    Yes! that was the reason (as all men know,
    In this kingdom by the sea)
    That the wind came out of a cloud, chilling
    And killing my Annabel Lee.

    But our love it was stronger by far than the love
    Of those who were older than we--
    Of many far wiser than we-
    And neither the angels in Heaven above,
    Nor the demons down under the sea,
    Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
    Of the beautiful Annabel Lee:--

    For the moon never beams without bringing me dreams
    Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
    And the stars never rise but I see the bright eyes
    Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
    And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side
    Of my darling, my darling, my life and my bride,
    In her sepulchre there by the sea--
    In her tomb by the side of the sea.


    -- THE END --

    one of many favs by him...

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    My Testament


    When I am dead, bury me
    In my beloved Ukraine,
    My tomb upon a grave mound high
    Amid the spreading plain,
    So that the fields, the boundless steppes,
    The Dnieper's plunging shore
    My eyes could see, my ears could hear
    The mighty river roar.


    When from Ukraine the Dnieper bears
    Into the deep blue sea
    The blood of foes ... then will I leave
    These hills and fertile fields --
    I'll leave them all and fly away
    To the abode of Cod,
    And then I'll pray .... But till that day
    I nothing know of God.


    Oh bury me, then rise ye up
    And break your heavy chains
    And water with the tyrants' blood
    The freedom you have gained.
    And in the great new family,
    The family of the free,
    With softly spoken, kindly word
    Remember also me.


    Taras Shevchenko
    Pereyaslav,
    December 25, 1845


    Translated by John Weir
    Toronto, 1961



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    I wrote this poem for my boy toy of 6 years, when I was in love with him:

    "We are Vampires, you and I. Dark, wounded creatures that feed upon eachother for strange needs. But we can never seperate"...

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    very nice Jennifer and cat
    keep them comein

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    Just Another
    By: Me

    just another burden
    just another pain
    just another droplet
    in a field of rain

    just another heartache
    just another blow
    just another break-down
    in the freezing cold

    one more little smudge
    i spilt it agian
    made another mark
    its just another stain

    just another tear
    just another cry
    just another question
    and the answer's, why?

    just another scream
    just another fight
    just anothe blow-out
    when the time is right

    one more little rip
    i cut it again
    made another scar
    its just another vein

    just another gap
    just another blade
    just anothe stream
    in the world i made

    just another kid
    just another fool
    just another life
    taken by school

    one more little laugh
    to those that cried
    made another loser
    commit...
    just another suicide

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    Quote Originally Posted by morbid_lady
    Just Another
    By: Me

    just another burden
    just another pain
    just another droplet
    in a field of rain

    just another heartache
    just another blow
    just another break-down
    in the freezing cold

    one more little smudge
    i spilt it agian
    made another mark
    its just another stain

    just another tear
    just another cry
    just another question
    and the answer's, why?

    just another scream
    just another fight
    just anothe blow-out
    when the time is right

    one more little rip
    i cut it again
    made another scar
    its just another vein

    just another gap
    just another blade
    just anothe stream
    in the world i made

    just another kid
    just another fool
    just another life
    taken by school

    one more little laugh
    to those that cried
    made another loser
    commit...
    just another suicide
    wow i dont know what to say I love it... it is beautiful you need to post more of you work I would lve to see what eles you have writin

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    Quote Originally Posted by MistressJennifer
    I wrote this poem for my boy toy of 6 years, when I was in love with him:

    "We are Vampires, you and I. Dark, wounded creatures that feed upon eachother for strange needs. But we can never seperate"...

    It reminds me of the late Ian Curtis for some reason.

    When the routine bites hard
    and ambitions are low
    And the resentment rides high
    but emotions won't grow
    And we're changing our ways,
    taking different roads
    Then love, love will tear us apart
    again (4)

    Why is the bedroom so cold
    Turned away on your side?
    Is my timing that flawed,
    our respect run so dry?
    Yet there's still this appeal
    That we've kept through
    our lives
    Love, love will tear us apart again (4)

    Do you cry out in your sleep
    All my failings expose?
    Get a taste in my mouth
    As desperation takes hold
    Is it something so good
    Just can't function no more?
    When love, love will tear us apart
    again (4)


    One Eyed Cat

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadow
    very nice Jennifer and cat
    keep them comein
    Thanks to you for such excellent threads.


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    My favorite is too long to post here.

    Check THIS link to read "Howl" by Allen Ginsburg

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    Quote Originally Posted by DharmaLion
    My favorite is too long to post here.

    Check THIS link to read "Howl" by Allen Ginsburg
    Excellent poem. I love the beats.


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    Addiction

    By: Me

    An addict, no not me
    It's my choice, not need
    Today it's only two or three
    My veins, the spike will bleed

    Now, I feel no pain
    Memories fade day to day
    Chemicals rushing through my vein
    Did I get high, yet today....

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    There is so much talent here!!!! We should start a punk band and make songs out of all of these.. Wait, I already did that....

    Actually my boy toy liked my little poem about him. He usually hates everything. He used to yell at me when I told him I loved him. But now I don't love him anymore, so I don't tell him, so hah! hah!

    I liked it better when I loved him. It was a lot sexier.... I think I need a new boy toy.

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    my fav poem is Address to the Deil by Robert Burns, its a bit long, but i have it on my site http://morbid_lady.tripod.com

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    Quote Originally Posted by MistressJennifer
    There is so much talent here!!!! We should start a punk band and make songs out of all of these.. Wait, I already did that....

    Damn straight you did

    Actually my boy toy liked my little poem about him. He usually hates everything. He used to yell at me when I told him I loved him. But now I don't love him anymore, so I don't tell him, so hah! hah!

    Our lips are sealed.

    I liked it better when I loved him. It was a lot sexier.... I think I need a new boy toy.
    What are your qualifications for a boy toy? If you can specify a look, emotional type etc I might be able to order one up in NYC. I have a few friends there who have probably encountered every tragicomedy NYC has to offer.


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    Waters
    These waters wash over me with great dignity,
    Waters as clear and blue as my eyes could once see
    Under these seas I lie still
    Why have I been the one you must kill?
    Red waters wash over, stained of my blood,
    Over the shore these stains shall flood
    I did not ask for this but my peace has been cast
    It isn’t so bad to be dead at last.

    Ending friendships
    People die, and relationships end,
    Taking away from you your best friend
    Don’t you miss their smiling face
    Wish you could feel their warm embrace
    Waiting to die,
    Only able to cry
    From talking to them everyday
    Now in their mind you slowly decay
    To them you are nothing more
    They don’t care you are dead on the floor
    In your hand lies a knife,
    They stand there laughing at how you have end your life.

    (I have A LOT better ones but they are way too long!)

    -Wednesday

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    This is a tribute

    Little Girl Lost
    Thru the alleys of our youth we searched. Thru fields tainted with the blood of that tragic town. So young we were, then, not knowing what it was we were really searching for. The media descended like vultures, foreshadowing what would be found of you. A tragedy without dignity. A tragedy without end.

    In the old cemetery they lay, flawed heroes destroyed by the tainted findings of their own paths. There was no moral to the story. It seems to me the more we searched, the more we lost. You had never left us. By your side, some of your searchers now rest for eternity.

    It may be left for me, now, to tell the tales. The tales of a time and place like no other. A flow of tears I had never known before or since. Tales of happy children and abrupt goodbyes. The tales, most of all, were of happiness and overcoming. You deserved no less.

    It was I who never stopped looking for you. I chased the phantom puppet of your despicable assailant. I heard you whisper for all who left as you did. I searched far and wide, PK. In the end, I could never quite find you.

    Thru the alleys of our youth, I am reminded again of that time and place. Thru fields tainted with the blood of that tragic town; I bid remembrance to you, to Q, to K and to all that remains. We had such great times once, and that is all that is to be found now.

    Sleep, Little Girl Lost. I must dim the last beacon of light and end my search.


    One Eyed Cat




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    wow poetry , I wrote some a while back and then stopped
    but I still remember some
    here goes

    #1 #2 #3
    you stupid cat old man in the sea forty fathoms
    go catch a rat where could you be beneath the sea
    the stores closed maybe you got eaten when I'm dead
    and that is that by the great manitee that's where I'll be


    #4
    cement me in
    and make it deep
    another brick
    from the heap
    use me to build your structure high
    use me to help you reach the sky
    you put me low
    just to show
    what fate befalls
    the bricks that know
    hmmm a bit dated but I still like them
    Last edited by Mr Karl; 11-18-2004 at 06:46 PM. Reason: wrong spacing

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    crap poems 1 2 3 are messed up and I realy liked them

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr Karl
    crap poems 1 2 3 are messed up and I realy liked them
    1 2 3 is cool, man. Great cadence.


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    Twisted Fairytale
    By:Me

    my knight in shinging armour
    rides upon a black horse
    tarnished steel
    a rusty sword
    he takes the darkest course

    my tower of stone it stands alone
    as i fall through the rotten floor
    i hear a scream
    it asks for more
    a tale of twisted scorn

    beasts with wings
    they fly the sky
    their shadows hide the sun
    at once there seen
    the people flee
    as fast as they can run

    a fairytale so twisted
    distorted and morose
    that demons sing
    and dance around
    and make too many toasts

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    ...........(about my x-fiance)
    by me (camby savelle)

    I invoke this.drowning in my velvet sea.
    I chose you.in hopes you'd help me breath.
    Maybe I’m too obsessive & over-protective.
    Maybe I’m too-less-of-a-shadow-&-smile-neglective.
    Its deeper in your eyes I should have looked.
    A privileged chance I could have took.
    So I say.so I pretend.so I FUCKING LIE (to myself).
    So I lay.at the end.in a happy disguise.(I NEED HELP).
    & sometimes I hear your seductive whispers in the air.
    & sometimes I close my mind & picture you standing there.
    & sometimes I cry with the lights off & hold your dress.
    Wishing I could hold it all together.& just forget.
    My vanished joy.I MISS YOU SO MUCH.
    Ashley I’m sorry for us.that love wasn't enough.
    (So this is it)
    This is me.the little blue boy.with a broken heart.
    (& This was then)
    This was you.my abused angel.before our cracked lives fell apart.
    & I'd wake for that scarlet sunrise once more.
    I'd say “I LOVE YOU” when you walked barefoot on the shore.
    Remember our wedding day? how perfect it was suppost to be.
    Just us. staring with the nightsky.wishing it more then fantasy.
    This is the last time I hate myself.for never letting go.
    The fallen child of a past dream.losing your hold.
    Now I’ll smile.even if it wasn't meant to be.
    My destined conclusion of a story.sold so beautifully.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BloodyRomance
    Waters
    These waters wash over me with great dignity,
    Waters as clear and blue as my eyes could once see
    Under these seas I lie still
    Why have I been the one you must kill?
    Red waters wash over, stained of my blood,
    Over the shore these stains shall flood
    I did not ask for this but my peace has been cast
    It isn’t so bad to be dead at last.

    Ending friendships
    People die, and relationships end,
    Taking away from you your best friend
    Don’t you miss their smiling face
    Wish you could feel their warm embrace
    Waiting to die,
    Only able to cry
    From talking to them everyday
    Now in their mind you slowly decay
    To them you are nothing more
    They don’t care you are dead on the floor
    In your hand lies a knife,
    They stand there laughing at how you have end your life.

    (I have A LOT better ones but they are way too long!)

    -Wednesday
    oh come on now put up more of your poems up for us you are a beautiful writer I need more..

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    Quote Originally Posted by MistressJennifer
    There is so much talent here!!!! We should start a punk band and make songs out of all of these.. Wait, I already did that....

    Actually my boy toy liked my little poem about him. He usually hates everything. He used to yell at me when I told him I loved him. But now I don't love him anymore, so I don't tell him, so hah! hah!

    I liked it better when I loved him. It was a lot sexier.... I think I need a new boy toy.
    looks like some one needs a new play thing lol I hope you are successful in your search it shouldnt be hard for you... well who ever you finde sure is lucky..

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    Quote Originally Posted by Camby Savelle
    ...........(about my x-fiance)
    by me (camby savelle)

    I invoke this.drowning in my velvet sea.
    I chose you.in hopes you'd help me breath.
    Maybe I’m too obsessive & over-protective.
    Maybe I’m too-less-of-a-shadow-&-smile-neglective.
    Its deeper in your eyes I should have looked.
    A privileged chance I could have took.
    So I say.so I pretend.so I FUCKING LIE (to myself).
    So I lay.at the end.in a happy disguise.(I NEED HELP).
    & sometimes I hear your seductive whispers in the air.
    & sometimes I close my mind & picture you standing there.
    & sometimes I cry with the lights off & hold your dress.
    Wishing I could hold it all together.& just forget.
    My vanished joy.I MISS YOU SO MUCH.
    Ashley I’m sorry for us.that love wasn't enough.
    (So this is it)
    This is me.the little blue boy.with a broken heart.
    (& This was then)
    This was you.my abused angel.before our cracked lives fell apart.
    & I'd wake for that scarlet sunrise once more.
    I'd say “I LOVE YOU” when you walked barefoot on the shore.
    Remember our wedding day? how perfect it was suppost to be.
    Just us. staring with the nightsky.wishing it more then fantasy.
    This is the last time I hate myself.for never letting go.
    The fallen child of a past dream.losing your hold.
    Now I’ll smile.even if it wasn't meant to be.
    My destined conclusion of a story.sold so beautifully.
    it is awsome I love the way you put your pain in to your writing

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    I believe there's a place where the restless souls wander. Burdeend by the weight of their own sadness thy cannot enter heaven. And so thy wait, trapped between this world and the next, endlessly searching for a way to rid themselves of their pain in the hope that somehow, some day they will be reunited with the ones they love.

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    http://www.blueblood.net/boards/showthread.php?t=1984

    ^^^there is more of my poems if your intrested.

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    I'd like to turn this one, with a little bit of editing, into a song for my band... and, at some point, I'd like to write a HAPPY poem or song. Anyone else find that impossible or at least very hard?

    Gossamer Wings

    I fly on gossamer wings,
    high above crowds
    away from the cities,
    away from everything

    the only thing that can
    bring me down is you,
    but if you tear my wings
    i'll never forgive you
    because i put all my trust
    all my hope, all my love
    in your heart
    and i can't stand to fall

    so I fly on gossamer wings
    away from everything
    fragile like a spider's web
    and distant like the sea

    If I fall, it will be for you
    will it be far enough for you
    I don't know
    I never know, I never will
    Tell me when you want
    wings of your own,
    of mesh and lace and cloud
    and I will give them
    If you let me
    if you let me

    but now I fly on gossamer wings,
    away from everything
    fragile like a spider's web
    and distant like the sea
    I fly on gossamer wings
    i know of the holes in lace
    I know you can tear the mesh
    But I'll let you fly with me

    If you let me...

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    i cant write happy stuff ive pretty much sworn id never do it again because when i write happy stuff but then again i said the samr thing about writing acoustic stuff but as it turns out some of my best stuff is either accoustic or it started out as accoustic maybe you just need happy influences cause the thing that got me writing accoustic stuff was listening to to the alice in chains unplugged cd

    By the way i really like that poem

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    When I attempt to write happy poems it just really gets me freaking pissed off!

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    happy poem by me

    last night I heard the peasants sing
    'bout things that chime and things that ring
    it seems that someone broke the clock
    and smashed the peices with a rock

    but know now that I am the king
    I like my things that chime and ring
    I'll take the money from your sock
    I will get back my tick and tock

    last night I heard the peasants wail
    that all thier crops were smashed by hail
    thier livestock all died from disease
    thier children stung by killer bees

    but know now that I am the king
    and poverty my taxes bring
    I try not to laugh at your hungry pleas
    My food it comes from overseas

    and now this king that has grown old
    has lived a life that was fortold
    by your peasant witch so long ago
    it's all you wanted it's all you know


    my very own happy poem, well it makes me happy

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    these were my two favorite poems when i was little.

    On the Ning Nang Nong

    on the ning nang nong
    where the cows go bong
    and the monkeys all say boo
    theres a nong nang ning
    wheres the trees go ping
    and the tea pots jibber jabber joo
    on the nong ning nang
    all the mice go clang
    and you just cant catch em whent hey do
    so its ning nang nong
    cows go bong
    nong nang ning
    trees go ping
    nong ning nang
    the mice go clang
    what a noisy place to belong
    on the ning nang ning nang nong

    Two Witches

    there was a witch
    the witch had an itch
    the itch was so itchy it
    gave her a twitch

    another witch
    admired the twitch
    so she started twitching
    though she had no itch

    now both of htem twitch
    so its hard to tell which
    witch has the itch and
    which witch has the twitch

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    Depression
    It covers me like a warm blanket

    Forever close and tight

    I know not how to shake it

    My security in the night

    It gives me inspiration

    Lives inside my head

    I try in desparation

    It'll be with me until I am dead

    I so want to break these chains

    I live with the fear

    This that cause my pains

    I can't shed a tear

    I live life, as I should

    I know pain, fear and love

    I would lose it if I could

    Someone give me a shove


    Pzychotic Art 04'

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    It's kind of long and stupid sorry!
    Come with me my dearest girl,
    Come with me into my cold dark world
    The monsters creep here all night long
    So come with me while we sing our song
    In the dark of the night we stalk the living
    We kill all night , that's our way of giving
    We are doing you all a favor by sending you to your home
    Down where the flames will make ashes of your bones
    Don't sin little girl, don't be like me
    You don't want to die like me, hanging by a rope from a tree
    Come with me into the gates of hell
    Where you can no longer hear that wretched church bell
    Come with me into my cold dark world
    So sinister,the purest skin shall be curled
    Down we go, laughing all the way
    Little girl you shouldn't obey, this will surely be the end of your day
    Satan has come for you
    Your life is done for you
    Decaying slowly rotting to the bone
    The pain so great you can't help but moan
    The pain will never stop
    For eternity you will drop
    It's unbelievable
    Simply inconceivable
    You are mine now, a slave of death
    You have breathed your very last breath
    Diving into the flames of dawn
    Follow me , now come along
    Perish young one into your grave
    Your the one I'm going to save
    The flames lick you
    Satan kisses you
    Die little girl
    Just give it a whirl
    You might find it fun
    To consume everyone
    Come with me little angel into your grave
    Now you be the one to be brave
    Falling, falling into the hole
    This is where you shall stay because your life I have stole
    Dark, damp mudd to consume you
    This is what I have done to you
    Decaying slowly fading away
    Rotting away right where you lay
    You will be like me
    Which should fill you with glee
    You are no longer sane
    But you still feel all the pain
    Now your god will be Satan, pure evil he is
    No little child you are one of his
    From the pits of the grave flames rise
    Taking you to your god you despise
    Rising from the flames is Satan himself
    Now that he has you, he has found his new wealth
    A kiss on the cheek will send you to hell
    No one can hear you, so don't bother to yell
    Falling endlessly through time and space
    Now you must believe that death has a face
    Hell is a place with endless fears
    A story well told by all your shed tears
    The blood from your eyes drips on to the burnt ground
    This is where your eternity has been found
    Sinner sinner
    I shall have you for dinner
    You are the one that I seek
    From your cuts blood shall leek
    Gripping tight I pierce your skin
    This is what you get for your sin
    I want to lick your bones until they are dry
    Come on, stop me..I'd like to see you try
    Come with me my dearest girl,
    Come with me into my cold dark world
    Your now in hell, Satans lair
    For your sin, it's only fair
    Dream go to sleep and take a break
    Just remember here you will never wake
    We don't need the sun
    To burn everyone
    Here in hell you will stay
    In the darkness you will lay
    The only light is the flame
    Which should fill you with all your shame
    Worship me with great power
    Do it now or it's you I will devoure
    All these souls they are my heat
    I'm the only one that cannot be beat
    I shall throw you down
    But down make a sound
    You cannot beat me
    You cannot defeat me
    In my world you shall stay
    Always here day after day
    Nobody cares for you
    No one will be there for you
    You are dead now
    Satan has kissed you now
    I have taken away every real
    Lives are simply so easy to steal
    If I go in your mind you won't believe what I'd find
    Insane you have become
    Just like everyone
    Never return to Earth
    This is your new birth
    Hell is filled with bitter illusions
    Real or not , it's your conclusion.
    -Wednesday

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    a friend ofmine a zillion years ago (okay like 7) wrote this..
    A Symbiotic Compilation of Post Apocalyptic Rhetoric



    By Rev. Nebachadnezzar

    Fried worms and cheese you ask me of me?I would not dream of killing thee.The sanctity of life exsists, though not a virtue on my list.

    Purple monkeys fly by night, armed with spoons and dynomite.Scavengers of you and I, they beat us down from the sky.

    Camels, clouds, and underwear... what are you doing under there?Zipcord Lemmings stole my cake...I need its power to awake.

    Lightning has fermented me, come vegetate and you will see.Gravy, gravy everywhere! (Yet not a head upon my hair.)

    Visit Bob and find your shoes.This is a game you'll never lose.

    There's something else that you will see... five dollars cash do you owe me.

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    Since I didnt know of this thread when I posted the Ode to Death Poem, I guess I will share two others I wrote, the first is a poem, the second is a song I wrote

    Rain Falls

    Like a washing of the soul
    From the dark clouds of My life
    It cleanses the face of sorrow
    It brings sorrow to the face
    Lightning like a slap,
    Thundering through the body like hate
    The awakening it brings to Me
    The Love, the sorrow, the hate it brings
    The clashing of goodness and evil envelops all
    The eternal rain of life

    Rain Falls
    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    Play With Me

    I come to you,
    to feel your pain
    to end the days
    out in the rain
    you came to me,,
    no child of mine,
    and turned your back
    the very first time.
    without a cause,
    with out a clue,
    I took the life
    right out of you
    the blood that fell
    onto the ground
    fills me up
    bought you back around

    it took no time for you to see
    it took no time for you to be
    mine forever
    an eternity,
    doll to play with
    now play with me,

    never moving,
    never gone
    mute forever
    nothings wrong
    Give Me pleasure
    give you pain

    now your lifeless
    a lump of clay,
    waiting for someone
    to come and play
    with your mind gone
    you are mine
    I have made you
    you are blind
    without remorse
    there is no shame
    but the end has
    already came

    it took no time for you to see
    it took no time for you to be
    mine forever
    an eternity,
    doll to play with
    now play with me,

    I can see you
    you wont run
    cause you need me
    I am the One

    enjoy

    Mik

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