What do you think of my resume? (Work in Progress)

[BrightStar]

Michael Hymanson
(Address not posted on forum for obvious reasons)
(Phone number not posted for same reasons as address)



Objective: To gain knowledge and experience in the photography field, so as to eventually become a professional photographer as well as obtaining a position with a major photography company.





Education
2001 G.E.D, Hallandale Adult Community Center



Experience
March 1999-November1999 Custodial Engineer, McDonalds
(Left due to uncivil conduct and sanitation issues from other McDonalds Employees)

Sanitation management, Re-stocking of Condiment Dispenser, Kitchen assistance, as well as numerous other duties.


Accomplishments
Volunteer work for the Salvation Army with the NJROTC. Volunteer work for Toys For Tots with the NJROTC. Numerous awards and Merits of achievements and accomplishments in the NJROTC. Several Promotions while in the NJROTC. Commanding a squad while in NJROTC(Managment Experience).

[BrightStar]

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Experience
March 1999-November1999 Custodial Engineer, McDonalds
(Left due to uncivil conduct and sanitation issues from other McDonalds Employees)

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I also avoid eating at McDonalds unless needed, after finding out the conditions and stuff of how they make their food.

To McDonald's credit, they are better than Hardee's ...most of the time

[koolagh]

Never Dis another company in your resume'. The reason being, anyone considering hiring you would feel that, should you be terminated or resign, you would do the same to their company.

[BrightStar]

Good point, although that part wasnt on my actual resume. That was just an explanation for the people here, and on the rough draft as well.

[BrightStar]

Good point, although that part wasnt on my actual resume. That was just an explanation for the people here, and on the rough draft as well.

And that part is not even on my resume, thats why that was in a seperate box/post